Eliot depicts a typical working class neighborhood, at night fall on a cold winter day. Darkness, loneliness and desolation characterize that time of day. The title, Preludes, contrasts with the diction of the poem. The body of the poem, excluding the last line, has vivid imagery allowing the reader to experience the depression of the dramatic situation. The last line of the poem unexpectedly transforms the tone of the poem, creating an optimistic air.
The title Preludes is an elegant word belonging to a cultured and educated world which contradicts the portrayal in the poem. The poem illustrates a working class neighborhood with the "smell of steaks" contrary to the denotation of the word "prelude" which means "a short piece of music." Another diction for "prelude" is "an introductory" which seemingly foreshadows the body of the poem as an introduction to the last line of the poem. .
Throughout the wording in the body of the poem there is an element of ending accompanied by darkness. "The winter evening settles down" inserts at the very beginning of the poem an ending feeling. There is a reference to time, "Six o"clock", signifying the end to the working day. This verse stirs a dramatic stop in the poem. "The burnt-out ends of smoky days" typifies finality through an illustration of a burned piece of wood. "Gusty shower wraps" and "broken blinds" details a description of extreme poverty seen through the body of the poem. The central themes in the poem are of solitude and depression depicted through imagery of the dreary landscape. The visual images of "smoky days", "steams" and " the lighting of the lamps" appeal to our senses. "Shower beats" and "stamps" arouse our auditory senses. As well, "grimy and "smoky days", stir our olfactory and tactile senses. .
The last line of the poem presents a contrasting tone. "And then the lighting of the lamps". This is the first reference to light throughout the poem.