Moesha

             Moesha was a classic show that made a Hugh impact in my life. The show helped me to make important decisions in life; it was also a good show for all audience to watch. [Did you mean to type the word "audience" in the plural?].
             Moesha was shows that had people, as well as I think twice and realize that the issues of each episode of Moesha really send a positive message. [Read the sentence aloud. What words need to be eliminated?].
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             Even though it can slip very easily into being preachy, moralistic and patronizing, I do still watch Moesha at any opportunity I get. It's far from unbearable, and certain members of the cast are irresistible, so it's nice to switch your brain off for a bit and relax with Mo and the gang. The series centers on Moesha Mitchell, a young girl who aspires to be a journalist. Each episode centers on problems that any teenage girl would face whilst growing up. [Kedeisha, you may want to avoid archaic usage. Try "while" instead of "whilst" to avoid sounding pretentious. Does that make sense?] She lives with her father Frank and stepmother Dee, and also puts up with her younger brother Myles. But she has her friends to keep her sane, namely Kim and Niecy, and also next door neighbor Hakeem. Also in the fray are diner owner Andell who has a keen interest in the opposite sex, and Moesha has a number of boyfriends that appear as the series progresses. .
             The plots and twists that occurred through out the season were believable, but also became rather irritating. I was a teen back in 1995 when the show first aired on the UPN channel. The show came on at 8pm, which was a convenient time for teens across the country to watch, simply because everyone tried to finish up all their homework in order to watch the show. .
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             As a teen watching Moesha I was really irritated by how her father Frank came across as a very strict and an overprotective parent.