Black Elementary School, Jeanette had already learned everything the teacher taught in the class from her parents (Walls 58). It appears that the Walls children got the same education earlier than their peers. This example shows that the Walls children were well educated by their parents. More than that, when they attended the public school, Emerson, the Walls children were put in reading groups that were for gifted students by their teachers.(adjective clause) We can see that the Walls children not only received education earlier than their peers, but they also received high-quality education from their parents. Some people may say that the parents were doing a good job educating the Walls children, so it is better for the children to stay with their parents than to live in a foster home. However, this point is not strong enough to keep the Walls children with their parents since the Walls children's health and safety were threatened when they were staying with their parents. .
Taking the good education the children received into account, I still insist that the siblings should be taken away from their parents because the parents didn't take good care of the children's health.(particip. phrase) To illustrate this point, the Walls children's starvation experience is a suitable example. Rex Walls, father of the children, lost his job one day when the family was living in Battle Mountain. The family ran out of food, but the parents didn't make any effort to solve the problem of hunger. As a result, the children were so hungry that they had to steal food. While Jeanette stole food from her classmates' lunch bags, Brain, her younger brother, broke into a neighbor's house to steal food. Brian was caught and punished by his neighbor. This example shows that the parents didn't care about their children's health; more than that, the children's health and safety were threatened. It appears that the parents didn't shoulder the responsibility of taking care of the children(COLL); therefore, the children should be taken away from their parents.
