In reviewing my essays from throughtout the semester I had to make a decision on which one was the best. While making this decision I had to look at my essays from several different points of view. I had to judge them by the amount of work that I put in and the feelings that I had about the topic. This made me think about the feeling and passion that I had when I wrote this. The essay that I chose from throughout the semester was the love essay.
While reviewing my essays I saw that in my love essay I was passionate about the essay and I saw that I put more effort in it. It shows the how my inner feeling on the subject love. In this essay let out the feelingd that I have about love and how it affects me. The thing that differed in this essay from all the others is the fact that it really meant something to me. It shows my feeling s and if you read it and all the others you cam see that it more details and information on the way that I feel about love.
In my love essay I saw how much of an increase in quality that my work had. It changed massively. My work in the love essay compared to the other four essays that we had throughout the semester is much different and detailed. The essays weren't up to par with the other ones which they should have. The essays were actually not my best effort. As a whole my writng has grown tremendously.
Something that I can do in my writing to improve my writing is to not put myself in the essays as much. Another way that I can improve my essay is to not put so many self experiences in the essay as I have. This will make the writing sound like it is informing the person rather than going through a long draw out speech about why I feel this way.
As an overall feeling I chose this essay because I like how the writer had to express feelings and emotions into the writing. I also chose this essay because feelings were put into this essay and were things to explain me.