She stood next to me and I could see her features more clearly: her eyes framed with lush long eyelashes were a light misty grey, her cheeks were the colour of pink roses, a straight nose and full red lips – she seemed picture perfect. ... Lee standing at the door- her face was dark and her red eyes were circled by eye bags. ...

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