The strong stale stench of mold and urine claimed the air. The flickering of the light swept through the rotted, cracked floor, trailing away into the abyss. ... And it only got worse when she came into his father's life. ... She tilted her head and studied him, her thin lips turned over in a frown when she noticed his slumped shoulders. ... After all, he's matured into a real man."" ...

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• Approx Pages: 6
• Grade Level: High School