A metaphor is a comparison between two unlike things that have something in common. ... Further, in continuation, the writer tells that our senses are totally useless as they can only sense it but only work in our bodies through their experience. ... The writer says that while going through the notes of the students, she doesn't look the pages or the writing, but only the toils through which the students would have gone to write the notes, how much time, energy and brain they would have used for its composition. ...

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• Grade Level: High School

One thing that is common between the two writers is both of them insists on writing what comes to mind, at least to some level. ... Even when he was not actively writing, his mental notes about himself were descriptive. ... Not in the sense that she writes text book, but in the sense that her writing style and strategy is taken from one. ...

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• Grade Level: High School

I know it is common knowledge to know to have your body paragraphs be connected in some way but I just never put that knowledge to use. ... It makes it a little hard for me to come up with sentence that make sense, but at the same time also sound professional. ... On another note, the grade I received on my Response Essay did not really satisfy me, but I deserved it and have taken all comments into consideration and hope to better my writing skills over the coming years. ...

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• Grade Level: High School