1. Desiree Baby
Many phrases helped to thoroughly describe what was taking place, allowing me to better understand what was occurring. Detailed phrases, such as " in silence he ran his cold eyes over the written words- and "She turned away like one being stunned by a blow-, helped me to better visualize what the situation was describing and to feel what the characters were feeling. ... She no doubt saw mixed ancestry in the black communities and realized the cause of it. ... The concept of young Armand falling instantly in love after seeing Desiree standing by the gate is a bit suspicious and sounds more l...
- Word Count: 1926
- Approx Pages: 8