ATVS I"m going to tell you a little bit about quads and why I like them. ... When you get to become a good rider with your quad you can start going to dessert races. ... One of the reasons I think its fun is because I like to impress the people I ride with. ... Its fun to have someone to ride the trails with you or you can always race against them to see who better rider is. ... It is also fun to ride with friends because they can sometimes give you important advice that might make you a better rider....

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• Grade Level: High School

I like the rhyme scheme and the pentameter. ... The lines " our soldiers were landing in their helicopters into jungles their propellers swept like weeds seen underwater- gives you a beautiful mental picture. You can actually see weeds underwater swaying and also weeds being swept down from a helicopter. ... Prior to these lines the poem is talking about how as the men fall from the helicopters she sweeps harder and this quoted lines shows how it seemed like they were falling right out of the screen onto her floor. I think this is a good quality poem I would like to read more by Julia Al...

• Word Count: 197
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• Grade Level: High School