1. Where I Belong
I remembered feeling why I was so upset; I felt betrayed by the women I had fallen in love with after discovering that someone before me had "deflowered- her. ... As I walked in, I saw hundreds of people drinking and dancing. ... I walked to the bar where the bartender asked me "What would you like there, señor?... Everywhere I walked, people seemed to like my presence. ... Everything from that moment on seems to be in slow motion where I could distinctly see and remembered everything as the great tragic event happened. ...
- Word Count: 2004
- Approx Pages: 8
- Grade Level: High School