Touting this early record of success, I approached the American Red Cross and convinced them to help me expand the Heart Start program. ... In this internship I am responsible for attending rounds and medical conferences with residents, taking part in family interviews, reviewing charts and x-rays, observing various medical procedures and surgeries, correlating lab results, and discussing patient histories, disease processes and treatment plans with attending physicians. ... Saving my brother was the most significant accomplishment of my life, and I am proud of my efforts to heighten community...

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I am confident that my academic performance along the way will warrant admission to your university. ... As my track record reflects, I've gotten the most out of my four years at Florida State University. ...

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