1. Go Down Moses
A prime example occurs toward the end of her essay: "For the duration of the song Moses is, by turns, reassured, praised, and shouted on ward. ... Instead of generalizing, as she does when she discusses the hopes and history of the slaves in both America and Egypt, (never hitting on the topic), as is done throughout the entire middle portion of the essay, and paraphrasing the poem, as she writes in her final five paragraphs, I wish Erica Smith would have continued to cover the topic she began with, which was African-American spirituals, and used her space to introduce the readers to something...
- Word Count: 1266
- Approx Pages: 5
- Grade Level: High School