Surprisingly, starting McGraw was easy and simple to comprehend. ... I mastered picking out the verbs and different nouns in sentences. ... The hardest section for me so far were "Making pronouns with their Antecedents, and subject verb agreement.... There is so much detail when looking at the sentences I often confuse myself then choosing the incorrect structure of the sentence. ... My first experience with the website has been more than helpful and I'm so excited to learn and be able to expand as a writer. ...

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Blue is associated with cleanliness. ... The slogan is also a short sentence to impact the reader. ... The things you find a lot in ads are short sentences & simple vocabulary. ... The lines of appeal are effective because they deal with our social needs. ... We start off with the "we're different & unique claim". ...

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This is the opening paragraph with the main world. ... The third sentence shows to be a noun phrase, because both "implacable" and "November" describes the noun "weather". ... The first part of the forth sentence lacks both the subject and the predicate, so we could add "there is"/ "there was" in order to complete the sentence. ... Thus, we get a subjective sentence. ... Every paragraph starts with the main words (nouns) indicating the focus of the paragraph. ...

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I feel that the stories failure has more to do with its content. ... This is a small relatively unimportant sentence but if it had a touch of sarcasm in it along with a bolder structure it create a powerful image. ... In third paragraph, after the first few sentences she starts trailing off into a comparative and contrast essay. ... I love coming up with structures within the main structure of my paper. Because that is the way I like to read. ...

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With the $1.4 billion that the U. ... Because drug-related crime is often economically motivated, incarceration has little effect on the flow of money because it decreases drug use but drives up drug prices. ... The report, called Profile of Anti-Drug Law Enforcement in Urban Poverty Areas in Massachusetts, also says half of prisoners sentenced for drug offenses had never been charged with a violent crime.6 These numbers provide adequate evidence that the goal of mandatory minimum sentencing to keep criminals in jail is a little off target. ... If judges were given more flexibility with the ...

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In addition, the young adults might have a chance to start a new life if they are sentenced to do the compulsory community service. ... However, when they come out, they might start robbery and murder. ... Therefore, compulsory community service sentence is more efficient than the jail sentence. ... Therefore, by doing the community service will create job opportunities for them because not many companies will hire people with a jail record. ... Otherwise, the cycle continues because the jail punishment will only teach them to try harder not to get caught. ...

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I've conquered math, science, and history like gold, but faced with writing, I would coward with fear. ... A sentence of mine starts with "I", "It", "Because", "The." It is difficult for me to think of new ways to begin sentences or use sentence patterns that I see in other people essays. ... Now, in this English class, I am once again faced with what I tried to avoid for so many years, writing. ... Because I've put away writing for so long, I have to almost relearn everything from the beginning. ...

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Penology Critically evaluate the prison as the central form of punishment in Britain at the start of the 21st Century. ... Essentially this essay will evaluate prisons as the central form of punishment at the start of the 21st century. ... The retributive theory looks back to the crime and punishes because of the crime. ... Instead of looking to the past and the offence committed, the sentencer must concern himself with the future needs of the offender. Thus the chosen sentence should be the one with the best chance of bringing about the desired change. ...

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Many minutes after it started it stops, a murder has taken place. ... The decision was reversed when new methods of execution were introduced and executions started again. ... With hangings a rope is wrapped around a persons neck then they are dropped from a certain height with the other end of the rope attached to something above them. ... With this method of execution a inmate is strapped to a chair along with electrodes attached all over his or her body. ... The only reasonable sentence would be life sentence. ...

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They are ordered in movement of technology starting off with the oldest way of transferring news and ending up with the modern way of spreading news used in our days. ... Because this was very slow, it was mainly used for important information, which is suggested by the last two lines of the first verse. " while the head / had to listen, the heart could wait". ... The verse still suggests that it was quite a hard way of transmitting news, as it "still took three men with all their variables". ... The second verse also consists of long sentences, but still divided up into 3 sentences. ... T...

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Training should start as early as possible because some children start engaging in criminal behavior as early as 7 years of age. ... Because punishments for crimes are not consistent, they continue to commit crimes. ... Shichor argues that "three strikes" is extremely unfair because he believe it is aimed at only poor offenders, and the middle to upper class will be treated with leniency. Shichor does not like the fact that because third strikers are getting mandatory sentences, minor offenders are being released without having served even half of their time. ... Judges have the power to s...

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are drawn from the first few sentences. ... Simple words and sentences contribute to this mood. ... Leaves fall as the soldiers walk by and all else seems to change with these events. ... The river started clear and blue, but has now become dark and muddy. ... Answers to this turmoil can be found in nature because Hemingway compares and symbolizes everything to objects in nature. ...

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Death was a common sentencing. Sentence was carried out immediately. ... The Klan is a vigilante group because they went above the governed law and did as they pleased. ... This is unacceptable because their motives for vigilantism were completely illegitimate. ... No, because what I did to you far outweighs what you did to my car. ...

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Death was a common sentencing. Sentence was carried out immediately. ... The Klan is a vigilante group because they went above the governed law and did as they pleased. ... This is unacceptable because their motives for vigilantism were completely illegitimate. ... No, because what I did to you far outweighs what you did to my car. ...

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After you have decided on a topic, you can start outlining your essay. You are going to start with my three main points. Try to think of at least three sentences for each point. ... You essay should start with an introduction that includes your thesis statement and what you are going to write about specifically. ... Make sure every sentence is relevant. ...

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To begin writing, I familiarized my self with the article. ... So I went back and started to edit. ... I looked at my topic sentences and tried to group paragraphs in a way that flowed. Also, I looked to make sure that my topic sentences supported my thesis statement, which I focused into two sentences. ... It was the style of essay that I thought made the most sense with the prompt. ...

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Today, I feel I have improve lot in vocabulary, better spoken and written English than I had before starting this semester to be as easy as ABC. For me academic writing class like be as clear as mud because I do not eloquent in English writing. ... But I could not produce better sentence structure and good revision as I lacked grammatical and sentence structure knowledge. I was stuck with what I had written. ... However, because of my poor language skill it left me behind class participation. ...

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However the article then tells us "Chinese instruction is no passing fad, what with 1.3 billion people to talk to.... For example, the sentence 'jiu jiu jiu dian lai jiu dian he ni liao jiu dian (舅舅九点来酒店和你聊久点)', we have five 'jiu's with four different meanings and three 'jiu dian's with three different meanings here. People may easily mess up by having too many homonyms in one sentence. ... So the way to improve the understanding of homonym for Chinese learner is to focus on the whole conversation instead of sentence by sentence. .....

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Opposing the Death Penalty The death penalty has been a controversial issue in American society for the last twenty years, starting back in 1976 during the Furman v. ... It was argued against because two of the men were sentenced to death for rape, even though other people had been given much less severe punishments for murder (Bender 35)! ... To date, no one has ever been sentenced the death penalty, executed, then discovered to be innocent (Draper 35). ... In many of these cases, the convict was proven innocent because somebody confessed to committing the crime. ... Low income people ar...

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She started hearing voices at the age of 13. ... She was found guilty, and was sentenced to burn at the stake. She was not charged with being a warrior or a woman. ... Her sentenced was carried out. ... AS a warrior, Joan distinguished herself with her courage and morals. ...

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A good theme in the crucible is the hunger for power because it shows you can get actual power in the town of Salem. ... It also points to Judge Danforth because he was the one who sentenced John Proctor to hang, even though he knew he was innocent. He couldn't stop the sentencing because he thought it was too late to go back and if he did go back that the people in the town might start a rebellion and he wouldn't be as powerful as he was. ... I will not receive a single plea for pardon or postponement Twelve are already executed; the names of the seven are given out, and the villag...

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On those two pages 21 and 22 you can see that Eddie does not like Rodolpho, mainly because he is starting to flirt with Catherine. ... Catherine and Rodolpho start to go out from that Eddie's actions, temper change, because he is madly jealous of Rodolpho. ... Eddie is so jealous of Rodolpho that he makes himself believe that he's gay and he's only with Catherine because he wants to be a U.S.A. citizen. ... The second powerful sentence is a sentence that makes Catherine realize that her relationship with Eddie is affecting others. ... With that question Eddie realizes what h...

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This is generally a more shocking structuring and because so many events happen in succession, the reader is made to think about the ending. The effect is created by the use of speech at the start of the paragraph: ""Oh don't do that," said Katie, "do just sit down, Martha, you make us all feel bad."" ... This creates a very slow pace to the sentence which is then in contrast to the rest of the paragraph, which is a quick fire chain of events that happen. ... Wife and mother suggest that she will be like her, a wife and a mother but the word friend suggests that she will be someone ...

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Elisenda had the idea because all of the townspeople came to see the angel that they were going to keep it and charge people to see it. ... When they did clean it, it wasn't for the angel's sake; it was because of the stench from the coop. ... Much time passes, their child starts walking, and going to school and the couple still has the angel. ... But only after letting him first in the house, and Elisenda actually shouts "it was awful living in that hell full of angels" (292) kind of ironic I think that she uses hell and angels in the same sentence, when this angel does nothing b...

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The second interview was given six months after the first, eight months after initial start of probation. This interview would be identical to the first with two exceptions. First, they would not ask the offender about information on there demographics and criminal history before there arrest because it would not have changed from the first interview. ... Out of the 126 people who started the study, only 107 agreed to give a second interview. Few of the second interviews had to be taken in correctional facilities because of the re-arrest of a person in the study. 4) This study has sho...

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