Having been through a lot of problems together, the Walls children had a close relationship, and they loved, supported and helped each other(parallel structure). ... Even though some people might insist on keeping the children with their parents because of the good education the children received from their parents, I stand against their point of view because the parents neglected both the children's health and safety(parallel structure). ...

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