My selfless habits, expertise on the equipment, and good communication skills with my fellow members incorporated me as a successful and vital member of the Western Hills HS Color guard. ... By putting in after hours and always showing my willingness to help others for the better good of the group, I convinced my coach to choose me as the captain. ... I perfected my technique so much that during the winter season of my senior year I was chosen to perform a solo. ... Finally, I used my communication skills to greater unify the group and myself. ...

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